We're going to take a break from our Preparing for the Apocalypse program to bring you a special guest post from David R. Smith, the awesome author of the all-new The Dark Eagles: First Flight. Why is David awesome? Not only do we share the same name, but we also pen fantasy, and he's here to tell us what makes for great fantasy.
Take it away, Dave!
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I believe there is a careful balance between elements of
reality and elements of fantasy that makes a great fantasy story. The more real fantasy is, the greater the
ability it has to carry us away from our own reality. I think that is one of the many elements that
made Rowling’s Harry Potter so successful. With Diagon Alley located in London and Hogwarts in Scotland, she tied
the real world of common Englanders to a hidden world of wizards. We feel like we can visit these places and
‘almost’ pass over to the wizarding world of Harry. Tolkien did something similar. His world of hobbits and goblins takes place
on Middle Earth, an ancient period of our own Earth. It makes his world more real. We can almost believe the legend of the ring.
With my novel, The
Dark Eagles, I did something similar. I created an astronomically correct and similarly geophysical world to
our Earth. Maps, calendars, times,
celestial bodies, orbital periods and revolutions add to the reality of the
world of Fundautum. In the charts,
readers can discover what their age would be in relation to Kief. Or they can see how much they would
weight. A relatable fantasy world has
power to draw in the readers and more easily transport them to a new
place.
There are many elements that make a story great. Human relationships is one of them and is
something I’ve tried to focus on in The
Dark Eagles. I find the carefree
interaction between teenage friends especially amusing and profoundly
insightful. The innocence and simplicity
of young people seem to get right to the point of things without all of the
guards and facades we adopt when we become adults. The line between right and wrong can become
blurred through justification, as we grow older. The young see right and wrong more black and
white even though their unchecked selfishness can sometimes get the best of
them.
In the first book of the series, The Dark Eagles – First Flight, Kief finds himself battling his own
selfish impulses time and time again putting his friends’ lives, and his own,
in danger. Like true friends do, they
candidly call him on it and united they do what grownups should have done.
And now, I share a word or two on my short
journey as an author. I love the classic
adventure stories: Robert Louis Stevenson’s Treasure
Island, H. Ryder Haggard’s King
Solomon’s Mines, Mark Twain’s Tom
Sawyer. I love them for their
adventures and I love them for the near poetic words of their dialogues and
descriptions. A part of me aspired to be
like them. But that wasn’t my gift. We all have specific gifts and styles as
writers. We have to embrace who we are
and then work to develop it, to stretch it. With that, I say, be true to yourself as a writer. The other night I was watching a movie about
a writer who was apprenticing a young man. At one point, the young man was sitting at his typewriter thinking. The seasoned writer asked him what he was
doing and then told him to stop thinking and start writing. He told him there is no right or wrong in the
first draft. I have found that so very
true in my own experience. Just start
typing the words. You will be surprised
where your own gift of writing will take you if you unleash it. My wife, not a writer herself, encouraged me
to do it years ago as she tried to help me let go and stop pretending to be
some author I am not. She told me to sit
down and start writing about anything, especially something I hadn’t
thought-to-death about. She called it freewriting, or writing from the
heart. It was truly a liberating experience. You can visit my website here: www.thedarkeagles.com
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Kief loves exploring the rugged mountains on his horse, Natch, with his
best friend Tarc. But when he receives a mysterious map on his birthday,
left behind for him by his dead grandfather, Kief is thrown into an
adventure beyond even his imagination.
Leaving home to pursue his childhood dream of attending the merchant
academy on the coast, extraordinary events unfold propelling Kief, along
with his friends and his map, toward the same perilous destiny.
What the press is saying:
“Author David R. Smith does a fine job with his dialogue, which flows smoothly and wittily throughout. His interactions between characters are genuine, and the portrayals of his young female characters in particular are refreshing.”
The Deseret News, Salt Lake City, UT
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Amazing, David! Thank you for sharing your story and powerful message. It made my notes all big and fat with ideas. Just so you guys know, David's book is now available (you can find it here).
How about you guys? What makes for great fantasy for you? If you write it, what led you down that path? Are you enjoying it?
I'm (also) David, and I'll show you that boiling water trick Monday!
You put a lot of thought into your world to make it real.
ReplyDeleteAnd sometimes it takes the encouragement of one's wife, doesn't it?
Nice to met you, David!
This sounds great! I love fantasy. :) Throw in a horse and I'm sold. ;)
ReplyDeleteWow, that sounds awesome! I'll definitely check out the book!
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, David. I love how you outline what makes a successful fantasy.
ReplyDeleteFor me...fantasy only draws me in when the writer can create jaw dropping moments. Like in George R.R. Martin, about once per novel he has these moments (attack on the Fist of the First Men by the White Walkers or Quentin getting roasted by one of Dany's dragons) that send chills down my spine. That is what I live for and that is what I slog through pages and pages to get to.
It's the same in movies. I remember one of the things I loved in Babylon 5 was the epic feel of the war of the Vorlon vs. the Shadow. Or in the Belgariad, it was the epic battle between Ctuchik (sp?) and Belgarath.
So for me...I want a fantasy writer to do a slow boil. To build up to something with earth-shaking power being thrown around but to get there, we have to go on this journey of discovery with the characters.
Great advice and thoughts about making the world carry features we can relate to -- it does have the power of drawing the reader in. And the human element is always crucial. The books sound amazing and so well-written and thought-out. Thanks for sharing David-s.
ReplyDeleteThere are so many wonderful things I love about fantasy. David, uh, the one guest posting, I really enjoyed your detailed examples of how you went about providing the familiarity of our world to draw the readers in to easily suspend disbelief and embrace the world you created.
ReplyDeleteAnd David, uh, yeah, Powers...thanks for having David today :-)
Thank you David, to you and your guests, for your comments and allowing me to share a bit of myself with you. Keep adventuring.....
ReplyDeleteFantastic post! I do love when fantasy and reality brush shoulders. :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the release, David! I love what you said about making fantasy realistic to draw in the reader.
ReplyDeleteGreat post about fantasy worlds. With some fantasy books I'm not drawn in, but other times I'm pulled in because of the world building.
ReplyDeleteWell, I named my first son David, so it's a favorite name for me too.
ReplyDeleteAs an American, I find fantasy novels set in England, Scotland and Ireland have a greater setting for ancient mysteries and magic. They have more history, more legends and all those wonderful castles and ruins.
That's definitely one of the reasons I like fantasy--I love to escape to other realms and go on adventure.
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