Friday, October 15, 2010

Aspiring Advice: Choice and Consequence

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Who here likes RPGs? I know I do, but I know not to play very many of them because they literally take forever to get through and their rate of addiction is such that taking a break with a Kit Kat no longer holds up as a priority. What? No Kit Kats? I know I'll need serious counseling if I ever find myself turning those down.

The problem with early RPGs is their limited options. Today, RPGs (like Mass Effect) have taken a new turn, giving you almost endless options and choices to make with believable consequences that follow, whether good, bad, or meh. What does any of this have to do with writing? As an author, writing your first draft of any novel, you are literally writing your own "choose your own adventure" book, only by the time it's finished, your reader is literally stuck with the paths, choices, and consequences that you've given to your characters. Maybe that's why I like writing so much. It's a free RPG and I can do whatever I want. Take that, programmers!

My advice this week is to remember the importance of choices in your stories. You make choices every day. So should your characters, and your consequences should match. This makes for interesting and more believable characters and plot development. More importantly, remember to often give your characters options, weigh out the consequences and play them out in your mind or on paper to see where they will take your story. This way, you can effectively chart the future and plot out surprises for your readers. Nothing kills a story faster than predictability. And it's okay for your characters to make choices contrary to what you would do.

I don't just mean the big choices either. Understand the layout of the world you are writing about and think, "what would happen if Sally A: walked home, B: got a ride home, C: went to the mall with her friends, Z: polished her nails on a table just outside the school entrance, etc." Another example - if Gaholbrenidge (you guys already know how I feel about exhausting fantasy names. If not, that's next weeks advice) is faced with an army charging after him through a forest, will he A: stand and fight, B: run away, C: climb a tree, Z: play dead, etc? If Gaholbrenidge has a magic weapon that can level a forest, I'd pick A or C. I like climbing trees.

Choices define the character which should then relate to the reader. Consequences should then relate to the choice with no turning back (unless you're writing time-travel). The next time you read a book or watch a movie, look for decision making. Allow choices to be made in your stories that both move it along in an interesting way or makes the reader like or hate a character. Batman's choice to take the fall for Harvey's murderous rampage, "I killed those people," in The Dark Knight - completely unexpected and made us like him more than ever, even if the whole of Gotham city sees him now as a loose cannon that needs to be stopped.

I'm David, and I'm hit'en Pirate Island tonight!

P.S. I'm so shocked to see five new followers since Monday! I've give you all a shout-out soon.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Post: Twenty Eight - 28 - XXVIII

It's that time of year again - another year older!

How weird is it to look back on 28 years of walking on this planet Earth, breathing its air, and consuming its carbon-based lifeforms to sustain my own? Okay. Maybe these aren't the things you think about on your birthday, but I am grateful for the life I've lived and the two years I have left to be considered (physically) young . . . you can imagine how I felt ten years ago at a BJ's restaurant when a female server guessed my age at what I am now. Made me feel old then, but it's not so bad. Maybe she was looking for a date, for all I know.

I have since completed four rough drafts with two more in the works/one in hiatus, and I have two years left to get my writing somewhere before I have to shelf the hobby, go back to school, and get a real job. The heat is on, and maybe this won't work, since I'm only following in the footsteps of Dean Koontz's approach. With the two projects I have planned to be finished by this next summer, I can only hope that I may catch my break.

The Laire has been busy since Thursday! Please welcome as I give a shout-out to two new Laire followers: Jamie Burch and Hanny! Both are total and sudden surprises. I had not met either of them in person or visited their blogs - but I have since visited their blogs - and they are chock-full of awesome! Jamie is a fellow aspiring author of YA who is actively chasing her dreams, with a stylish blog to match those dreams.
Check out her blog here:
http://dancingdownserendipitystreet.blogspot.com
Up next is Hanny (last name?), who is something of a mystery and very much a great observer like myself who isn't afraid to post his thoughts on what has surely passed through the minds of most people. Insightful and at times funny, his blog is a worthwhile read. Check it out if you have a moment!
http://stoneintheriver.blogspot.com
Welcome to The Cosmic Laire, you two.

Updates: I wish I can say chapter 14 is done - but it's not. My awesome alpha readers e-mailed back several chapters to look at and consider revisions, but now that that's all done, I can focus again on new ground. Aside from attending a wedding, I have no excuse this week to not have chapter 14 done, as well as 15!.

My advisory column will be up on Friday this week (wedding and all). Now, since it is my birthday, my Cosmic readers can give me presents! How? Ask a question about writing or how to improve an aspect of your writing in the comments section! I'm running out of advice, so your questions will make suitable gifts :)

I'm David - and you can never outgrow Legos.