tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post7415839696666239068..comments2023-09-06T05:28:26.542-06:00Comments on David Powers King: The Fourth Platform-Building Campaign: The Second Challenge: Cost Of CrossingDavid P. Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-9946715228500954442012-03-13T16:19:09.830-06:002012-03-13T16:19:09.830-06:00Oh, I had so hoped for a happy end, but I guess it...Oh, I had so hoped for a happy end, but I guess it had to go that way. <br /><br />(I'm #82.)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06112359944059755033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-9525039861538267172012-03-13T14:18:35.009-06:002012-03-13T14:18:35.009-06:00Aw, so sad.Aw, so sad.Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-27315383864387027822012-03-12T19:09:54.567-06:002012-03-12T19:09:54.567-06:00So impressed with your entry and congrats on being...So impressed with your entry and congrats on being shortlisted to the semi-finals!Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-90864048802173699022012-03-12T11:30:42.719-06:002012-03-12T11:30:42.719-06:00Very cool! Thanks for letting me know. :)Very cool! Thanks for letting me know. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-69630271809015268352012-03-12T10:30:57.707-06:002012-03-12T10:30:57.707-06:00Congratulations! You've been shortlisted to th...Congratulations! You've been shortlisted to the semi-finals=)Katie Dunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915462239326916701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-72805747765816812282012-03-11T16:35:42.257-06:002012-03-11T16:35:42.257-06:00Very sad, but also very powerful - I felt like I w...Very sad, but also very powerful - I felt like I was there beside them while reading. Your descriptions are incredible! I was not expecting that little twist and the end and it makes me want to know more. Great job!C.B. Wentworthhttp://cbwentworth.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-2596108995281594492012-03-10T11:06:34.539-07:002012-03-10T11:06:34.539-07:00Dystopian is so sad, isn't it? Mind you, anyth...Dystopian is so sad, isn't it? Mind you, anything with a dog will be LOL. Very nice writing and compelling to read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09186491465911432817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-90700187770222978252012-03-10T02:22:11.476-07:002012-03-10T02:22:11.476-07:00How sad! But a great story! Very emotional!How sad! But a great story! Very emotional!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-35255460026649802512012-03-10T01:29:59.626-07:002012-03-10T01:29:59.626-07:00Excellent. Sad, but excellent.
Melissa Maygrove #1...Excellent. Sad, but excellent.<br />Melissa Maygrove #14Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-57410770984786229282012-03-08T23:34:08.299-07:002012-03-08T23:34:08.299-07:00Consistency. Your writings are always consistently...Consistency. Your writings are always consistently good. Just another case in point. So good, in a tragically sad way.Skippy Bo Bippyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08726223362818603739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-1028627292297530122012-03-08T18:49:10.651-07:002012-03-08T18:49:10.651-07:00so tragic and moving and unlike you!
great job!so tragic and moving and unlike you!<br />great job!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-60848688244326497092012-03-08T17:39:47.838-07:002012-03-08T17:39:47.838-07:00Insanely GOOD!!!Insanely GOOD!!!RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-979159291963232392012-03-08T17:29:41.334-07:002012-03-08T17:29:41.334-07:00What a sad twist but enjoyed the piece. Would love...What a sad twist but enjoyed the piece. Would love to know a full story on where they were before escaping. Sounds intriguing. :)Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-14557295660964890562012-03-08T17:22:04.988-07:002012-03-08T17:22:04.988-07:00"Even this was better than what they left beh..."Even this was better than what they left behind."<br /><br />They must have been running from someplace terrible.<br /><br />Great story! :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-11475741821585758412012-03-08T16:55:22.490-07:002012-03-08T16:55:22.490-07:00I love your use of adjectives. And that is a cool ...I love your use of adjectives. And that is a cool water pearl.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-63070043273826245882012-03-08T16:35:38.303-07:002012-03-08T16:35:38.303-07:00I enjoyed this! You are in Sereh's head so wel...I enjoyed this! You are in Sereh's head so well that we get the backstory we need while feeling her pain and determination. I thought Bengi was her brother rather than a love interest--maybe it's the way she cares for him and encourages him?<br /><br />Also, thanks for stopping by my blog and congratulations on winning a prize from the campaign! You can contact me at celesta.rimington@gmail.com with an address for where you would like the book mailed.Celestahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08445617947839984701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-5820365607053582812012-03-08T16:28:28.531-07:002012-03-08T16:28:28.531-07:00Great appeal to the senses, and so sad at the end!...Great appeal to the senses, and so sad at the end! Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-48909011351095673452012-03-08T16:20:18.537-07:002012-03-08T16:20:18.537-07:00Power to you for doing these, I admire it:)Power to you for doing these, I admire it:)Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01793077012143289985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-13236680183592414022012-03-08T12:55:43.000-07:002012-03-08T12:55:43.000-07:00So sad. But another epic success in the DPK writin...So sad. But another epic success in the DPK writing world. :) Never disappointed by your work!Leigh Covingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16377634002477171615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-77970796720136302002012-03-08T12:24:33.329-07:002012-03-08T12:24:33.329-07:00What a sad ending. Breaks my heart. I hope she liv...What a sad ending. Breaks my heart. I hope she lives and loves again!Jennie Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331827076858223497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-4802668513147155852012-03-08T10:25:19.594-07:002012-03-08T10:25:19.594-07:00That was so great! I'm so glad you shared!That was so great! I'm so glad you shared!Carolyn Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03780443388339294502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-12767710982304827952012-03-08T10:15:24.999-07:002012-03-08T10:15:24.999-07:00Wow. Tragic. Awesome! :)Wow. Tragic. Awesome! :)Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-16532385467326094582012-03-08T08:55:37.113-07:002012-03-08T08:55:37.113-07:00That was awesome. Definitely voting for you.That was awesome. Definitely voting for you.Esther Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07688983385593428361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-39556104963122357292012-03-08T08:33:34.829-07:002012-03-08T08:33:34.829-07:00Aww, just when I thought we might get a happy endi...Aww, just when I thought we might get a happy ending, you twist the knife :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-86860464849671423512012-03-08T07:46:35.931-07:002012-03-08T07:46:35.931-07:00That is always a possibility.That is always a possibility.David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.com