tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post3780886793569796288..comments2023-09-06T05:28:26.542-06:00Comments on David Powers King: Aspiring Advice: Falling Into ActionDavid P. Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-4973616115284344112010-12-28T11:34:31.443-07:002010-12-28T11:34:31.443-07:00Thank you, Shallee! I have the same problem, makin...Thank you, Shallee! I have the same problem, making it too long. I'll get it right this time.<br /><br />Jeff - hey! Long time no see! Thanks for checking out my blog. Expect a call from us, shortly. I will confess, I haven't picked up Robert Jordan yet, something I've been told to correct several times over. One of these days.David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-37932067186331745022010-12-25T23:34:07.514-07:002010-12-25T23:34:07.514-07:00Hey Elder King! It's Jeff and Ashlee Kempton h...Hey Elder King! It's Jeff and Ashlee Kempton here. Thanks for letting us know about your blog and for the Holiday card. We love you guys! Give me a call sometime eh? PS - Robert Jordan is missing from your writer list. Geez!!!! JKJeff Kemptonhttp://blahblahblah.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-32852684551814559602010-12-16T17:50:17.579-07:002010-12-16T17:50:17.579-07:00Good points! Falling action is a hard phase for me...Good points! Falling action is a hard phase for me to write-- I always tend to make it too long in my first drafts. It's hard to tie up all the loose ends in a succinct way! But it definitely can make the story fall flat if it doesn't work out right.Shalleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09907680428735740943noreply@blogger.com