tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post2639430324613497137..comments2023-09-06T05:28:26.542-06:00Comments on David Powers King: Writers' Platform Building Campaign: Challenge Two: Your ImagoDavid P. Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comBlogger101125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-4386502836675182712011-10-14T11:02:39.744-06:002011-10-14T11:02:39.744-06:00Humm.. I could have SWORN I had commented on this ...Humm.. I could have SWORN I had commented on this already. Oh, well. Another BRAVO certainly won't hurt! Well done!<br /><br />I REALLY like the short lines. Adds a lot to the mood of the piece here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-8707759818454015202011-10-05T19:14:33.277-06:002011-10-05T19:14:33.277-06:00A story well suited to poetry, and nicely done.
Yo...A story well suited to poetry, and nicely done.<br />You should be pleased with the result.PaulaSJwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16491509373593077949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-39373572655993424772011-10-04T19:29:41.488-06:002011-10-04T19:29:41.488-06:00Very nice job! I could feel the desire!
#189Very nice job! I could feel the desire!<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-63718701577595967732011-10-04T19:26:01.441-06:002011-10-04T19:26:01.441-06:00So poetic, and sad. Perhaps you should try your ha...So poetic, and sad. Perhaps you should try your hand at romance novels? lol :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-54591018717108930842011-10-04T14:58:38.066-06:002011-10-04T14:58:38.066-06:00Wow. Amazing piece. Stylish and not only is it evo...Wow. Amazing piece. Stylish and not only is it evocative, but I'm amazed at how many different emotions you managed to fit in such a small space without making it feel cramped.Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-71623195536792821102011-10-04T14:28:08.045-06:002011-10-04T14:28:08.045-06:00Well punch me in the gut and leave me breathless, ...Well punch me in the gut and leave me breathless, why don't you??? Wow, David...that's some serious power in those 200 words. Bravo!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-27488131558304092922011-10-04T12:34:00.793-06:002011-10-04T12:34:00.793-06:00WOW ! WOW ! WOW ! You have left me breathless ... ...WOW ! WOW ! WOW ! You have left me breathless ... speechless ... stunned ... what an amazing talent ! Thanks for stopping by my blog !MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/campaign-challenge-no-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-44358775404681157602011-10-03T17:56:54.087-06:002011-10-03T17:56:54.087-06:00Lots of emotion induced by the short snappy senten...Lots of emotion induced by the short snappy sentences. Very nicely written and good imagery. Well done.Sam Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01042888599773098090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-28260809742600844322011-10-02T18:44:01.900-06:002011-10-02T18:44:01.900-06:00This was beautiful. It was written so well I didn...This was beautiful. It was written so well I didn't even notice the mandatory words. Great job.Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-43739147293288410172011-10-02T10:54:47.873-06:002011-10-02T10:54:47.873-06:00Wow beautifully written. I love writing/reading t...Wow beautifully written. I love writing/reading these flash fiction pieces. I'm learning so much. :)kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-33800633208277737432011-10-02T00:11:04.790-06:002011-10-02T00:11:04.790-06:00Very pretty. And nice use of the words!Very pretty. And nice use of the words!Jeighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05224421886252533143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-2346751084668636742011-10-01T08:37:01.547-06:002011-10-01T08:37:01.547-06:00WOW. I usually don't like poetry, but you nail...WOW. I usually don't like poetry, but you nailed it! This was powerful, and emotional, and just pretty much perfect! Great job!Rachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-51352899798025336702011-09-30T13:36:36.049-06:002011-09-30T13:36:36.049-06:00Wow...very moving! I love how you used the poetry...Wow...very moving! I love how you used the poetry to make such a powerful piece. Nice work!Carlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15380048190884905579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-17047373589841116722011-09-30T03:12:50.552-06:002011-09-30T03:12:50.552-06:00Wow, that was powerful! And I LOVE those short sen...Wow, that was powerful! And I LOVE those short sentences!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-34685085542963976322011-09-29T20:41:30.273-06:002011-09-29T20:41:30.273-06:00Beautiful and great rhythm.Beautiful and great rhythm.Barbara V. Evershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350675979426950166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-54895073449146248422011-09-29T17:21:01.508-06:002011-09-29T17:21:01.508-06:00The thought of parting makes you oscitate when lon...The thought of parting makes you oscitate when long miles separate.<br /><br /><br />love that line. Sounds like a song lyric.Eliza Tiltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00765731038856226730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-10832415165731940022011-09-29T15:22:12.662-06:002011-09-29T15:22:12.662-06:00Wow, I was not expecting the tragic ending for the...Wow, I was not expecting the tragic ending for the lady love, but excellent imagery with the mirror to show they'll be together again. And the words were perfectly paced to tell the story.Jocelyn Rishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141176507423961390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-38800088730168969762011-09-29T13:22:40.315-06:002011-09-29T13:22:40.315-06:00That was wonderful! It had great cadence.That was wonderful! It had great cadence.Nicole Settlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06205918337710478398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-60820582562044540682011-09-29T12:37:54.693-06:002011-09-29T12:37:54.693-06:00There is so much in this and it's quite sad *s...There is so much in this and it's quite sad *sob*.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08533913253403252799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-1116050018104008252011-09-29T09:46:05.954-06:002011-09-29T09:46:05.954-06:00Wow! Intense, poetic prose. The mirror imagery was...Wow! Intense, poetic prose. The mirror imagery was awesome! Great job, David!Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-14463844045334693152011-09-29T04:44:47.796-06:002011-09-29T04:44:47.796-06:00This was so powerful. And so sad. Wonderful job, D...This was so powerful. And so sad. Wonderful job, David!Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-79420700854490148782011-09-28T22:58:40.489-06:002011-09-28T22:58:40.489-06:00So romantic. Reminds me of how I felt at times whe...So romantic. Reminds me of how I felt at times when I was younger. Before the real world slapped me cross the face.<br /><br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-19848193231505272212011-09-28T17:17:31.913-06:002011-09-28T17:17:31.913-06:00Absolutely enthralling. Sad and engaging at the sa...Absolutely enthralling. Sad and engaging at the same time. I would love to read more of your poetry. <br /><br />I'm # 157.Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-24737478807802544072011-09-28T17:09:07.129-06:002011-09-28T17:09:07.129-06:00Great entry! I love your writing style.Great entry! I love your writing style.Cherie Colyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205065477147957455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-63543753893671832852011-09-28T16:39:19.545-06:002011-09-28T16:39:19.545-06:00So intense and so sad! Well done.So intense and so sad! Well done.Shannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.com