tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post8765018184154959883..comments2023-09-06T05:28:26.542-06:00Comments on David Powers King: The Fourth Platform-Building Campaign: The First Challenge: CorneredDavid P. Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comBlogger112125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-14476592274937737312012-03-07T12:24:20.463-07:002012-03-07T12:24:20.463-07:00Congrats on the win! I'm looking forward to pr...Congrats on the win! I'm looking forward to providing a critique of your piece! Feel free to send whenever you're ready. Happy Campaigning!Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823739886038280225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-70971793193089513502012-03-07T05:18:57.090-07:002012-03-07T05:18:57.090-07:00Congrats on a great job placing in the challenge f...Congrats on a great job placing in the challenge finals!!Mark Koopmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03634424953074803816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-84344576471316703562012-02-27T14:57:49.673-07:002012-02-27T14:57:49.673-07:00Wow, great job. Who doesn't love zombies? Look...Wow, great job. Who doesn't love zombies? Look forward to reading more.Jennifer Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15450934437551004537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-2993434339392566472012-02-25T22:29:32.690-07:002012-02-25T22:29:32.690-07:00I can't believe I missed this first time round...I can't believe I missed this first time round. Excellent job, very creepy :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-6179085068993552862012-02-25T17:34:34.694-07:002012-02-25T17:34:34.694-07:00Yes!!! Finally a zombie one. I started on a zombie...Yes!!! Finally a zombie one. I started on a zombie novle for the nanoryhmo event but fell behind. This makes me want to return to it. <br /><br />I loved the explosion in the end. Was that an explosion?Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07095267602200187313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-51011050087789372642012-02-25T14:26:10.937-07:002012-02-25T14:26:10.937-07:00Wonderfully written! :) thanks for sharing!
I'...Wonderfully written! :) thanks for sharing!<br /><br />I'm #189. Hope you like it too!Jamie Dement (LadyJai)http://writebackwards.we3dements.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-44466341590525223682012-02-25T14:05:26.054-07:002012-02-25T14:05:26.054-07:00Wonderfully written. Wish I knew what happened bef...Wonderfully written. Wish I knew what happened before and after!Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-55085414190270664272012-02-25T08:49:22.414-07:002012-02-25T08:49:22.414-07:00Great descriptions and suspense! Well done!
(Hi! ...Great descriptions and suspense! Well done!<br /><br />(Hi! I'm Susan from My Withershins. I tried commenting earlier in the week with my Wordpress ID, but Blogspot didn't like that too much. I have since figured out I have to use this old bog site in order to post comments on Blogpost sites.)Humpty Dumptyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10944551615281487780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-82798378618917215412012-02-25T08:17:12.034-07:002012-02-25T08:17:12.034-07:00I'd want to read more of this. Great job!I'd want to read more of this. Great job!Stephanie Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01258321385403403810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-47249598975589898102012-02-24T20:43:59.188-07:002012-02-24T20:43:59.188-07:00What I liked was how you worked in just enough con...What I liked was how you worked in just enough context to hint at some back story that's intriguing without getting in the way.Scott Buryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05061034006121401082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-14296655266606410492012-02-24T19:32:29.396-07:002012-02-24T19:32:29.396-07:00This was awesone, very exciting!This was awesone, very exciting!Anstice Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659015918272722407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-84167508789275150912012-02-24T19:01:09.786-07:002012-02-24T19:01:09.786-07:00Hi David! Good news! You made it to the next roun...Hi David! Good news! You made it to the next round with your flash fiction piece! You've been short-listed to move on to stage two :)<br /><br />Stay tuned for more info on Rachael's blog.<br /><br />Congrats!<br />GinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-36501299930852217502012-02-24T18:18:39.751-07:002012-02-24T18:18:39.751-07:00Loved it! Keep em' coming!Loved it! Keep em' coming!Gilliad Sternhttp://gilliadstern.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-58375855280373908452012-02-24T08:11:59.154-07:002012-02-24T08:11:59.154-07:00This was an excellent little snapshot. Brilliant.This was an excellent little snapshot. Brilliant.Patricia Marqueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08647071143936129638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-42348705475399889382012-02-23T19:23:58.139-07:002012-02-23T19:23:58.139-07:00I loved it, and excited to know it's part of y...I loved it, and excited to know it's part of your WIP. Must be a great read!Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-61410068806432616112012-02-23T14:27:27.168-07:002012-02-23T14:27:27.168-07:00Awesome flash piece! Great tension throughout. I&#...Awesome flash piece! Great tension throughout. I'd read more. :)Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-36662414835538852332012-02-23T09:43:43.488-07:002012-02-23T09:43:43.488-07:00Wish this is just a part of a book and there's...Wish this is just a part of a book and there's more to go but no. Loved it :)Naresh Khoisnamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04466279465475629479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-66422910712045513552012-02-23T09:10:00.134-07:002012-02-23T09:10:00.134-07:00That was intense! I hate it when I fire my .45 too...That was intense! I hate it when I fire my .45 too soon. Ouch!Jay Noelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04757777693161610861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-2925886303152499772012-02-23T07:42:12.577-07:002012-02-23T07:42:12.577-07:00You had me at "sunbaked cattle carcasses"...You had me at "sunbaked cattle carcasses". Action packed 200 words for sure! Enjoyed it.<br />#160.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-72834896517217883312012-02-23T07:02:42.831-07:002012-02-23T07:02:42.831-07:00very interesting and amazing narration! so many ta...very interesting and amazing narration! so many talented people around.. i'm so glad i stumbled on this campaign! :DDellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14718955220442774056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-43454964791034952172012-02-23T06:17:29.222-07:002012-02-23T06:17:29.222-07:00Nice. I really enjoyed reading this.
Melissa Maygr...Nice. I really enjoyed reading this.<br />Melissa Maygrove<br />#149 on the Campaign Challenge listMelissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-89345941879745728652012-02-23T04:51:24.512-07:002012-02-23T04:51:24.512-07:00Mutating zombies. Can't be beaten. :)
Like ot...Mutating zombies. Can't be beaten. :)<br /><br />Like other commenters, I'm awfully impressed with the stench of the sun-baked carcasses. And how COULD he/she miss the smell of fuel?? This certainly looks like the prelude of a movie, the pre-casting scene.JDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16498626563468726258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-55062197874929679852012-02-23T04:48:56.240-07:002012-02-23T04:48:56.240-07:00Wow, wow. Excellent!Wow, wow. Excellent!JDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16498626563468726258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-77401604613837317372012-02-22T22:42:00.790-07:002012-02-22T22:42:00.790-07:00Sounds like a perfect trailer for your WIP when it...Sounds like a perfect trailer for your WIP when it's finished. I know I already want to read it. Nice job! I "liked" it.<br /><br />I'm #88. Comments welcome.<br />RichardAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-62855473411237698252012-02-22T21:04:13.531-07:002012-02-22T21:04:13.531-07:00Awesome job! I knew the assignments would be chall...Awesome job! I knew the assignments would be challenging (which is why I didn't sign up). I don't think any of my mss discuss shadows, so I couldn't even cheat. lolStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com