tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post7208379352849329620..comments2023-09-06T05:28:26.542-06:00Comments on David Powers King: Aspiring Advice: Feelings - The Right Intensity For Your Character's EmotionsDavid P. Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-37757431111091684832010-10-23T06:06:33.177-06:002010-10-23T06:06:33.177-06:00Great list :D And I agree, your background is fine...Great list :D And I agree, your background is fine as it is!<br /><br />Just wanted to say hi - saw your comment on Michelle's post about blogiquette and I thought I'd could help you towards your next round number of followers ^.^ Always good to meet fellow fantasy writers!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-72019618699657762602010-10-22T21:53:13.683-06:002010-10-22T21:53:13.683-06:00Colene, Melissa - thank you for your feedback. I&#...Colene, Melissa - thank you for your feedback. I'm glad to know the Laire looks right to you. Now I need to figure out what's with my end. <br /><br />I never thought of it that way, Melissa - avoiding the thesaurus to maintain natural expression to your character. I like that.David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-50505712801733205792010-10-21T20:35:31.125-06:002010-10-21T20:35:31.125-06:00Your background is wonderful!
I like how you rela...Your background is wonderful!<br /><br />I like how you relate intensity and proper word choice, I think its easy for writers to forget sometimes. I try not to use a thesaurus because I want the language to be organic to my characters.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1135194497307080856.post-4476357079104931672010-10-21T19:11:06.356-06:002010-10-21T19:11:06.356-06:00background is all pretty and planety to me!
Such ...background is all pretty and planety to me!<br /><br />Such a nice post. I love thinking of new words to describe emotion but it is a little tempting to use words that just sound nice but don't mean the right thing(too big/too small) <br /><br />Well said!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.com